Card Idea: Silvester de Ruiz (Lasombra 11 cap)

I don't like the Quasi Lutz text. I preferred it as a more proactive text.

Sylvester de Ruiz



Sabbat Regent.
When a minion you control takes a political action which passes, choose a vampire controlled by your predator or prey; that vampire takes 2 unpreventable damage. +2 bleed.
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Juggernaut1981 wrote: I don't like the Quasi Lutz text. I preferred it as a more proactive text.

Sylvester de Ruiz



Sabbat Regent.
When a minion you control takes a political action which passes, choose a vampire controlled by your predator or prey; that vampire takes 2 unpreventable damage. +2 bleed.
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so a possible decent archetype with this version is power structure breeder with creation rites etc. then your weenie las go on a rampage with KRCs that smash opponents vamps as well. 11 caps are supposed to be strong, I wonder if this pushes it a little too far though. I am thinking maybe 1 damage instead of 2.

Is it better to do 2 damage, where u control the timing of that being inflicted (ie: it's only going off when u choose to call votes); or do only 1 damage, but every time a vote is called (ie: makes the other players think abt whether they really want to call their KRC & screw ur prey at the same time, but also 1 damage is not immediately punishing)??
Also, u could make it "burn 2 blood or life" - screws allies (maybe too harsh for allies tho) and hurts a vamp, but won't bin them completely

PS: it can be a bit confusing when ur editing the initial post after others comment on it, or rather it makes them look a bit stoopid.

Sorry - should also hv said the basic idea seems great
The more non-cam vamps the better, generally speaking, and especially a few interesting fatties that have decent captions & disciplines!!

Is there any way to see the addition of 1-2 unusual disciplines - i dont kno, Myth, Nec, Qui for example - just to offer the possibility of unusual deck combos/builds.
(obviously staying away from potential abuse combos - eg: Ser...)

I clearly do not kno the "historical" background of the vamps/clans/WoD so this comment is in disregard of that. I do like the backgrounds, but i also like the idea of interesting (but not overpowered) deck-builds .